Aww cute short poem very sad but got streight to the point. Amazing! Keep up the great work!

Wow i really love this poem......it looks like you put alot of work into it.....great job .....5/5......keep on writting and check out some more of my poems if you want to thankz..

Awee. this is a great poem! ur really talented! keep up the good work this has a great flow and alot of awesome describing words that make the emotions clear. congrats on a fine write!! p.s. i;d love it if u'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks!
Rachel<3