Its so true. ^_^

its not a bad poem!! u've written better, but its certainly not bad. =] and everyone here can relate to it, so it doesn't matter about the structure of this, its the content that is key.

keep writing!! u have so much talent.
xxx

This is prob my favorite of yours that i have read. It was interesting with a nice flow great meaning being portrayed behind it and strong emotions which flowed nicely throughout the whole thing. Well done~mel

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

Very good, I liked the almost identical ending and beggining...great job. Thank you for reading my poems...I had already commentd and rated body of tears. -Unattractive1

This is a mint poem, its like yep, i really really, like it, i think i like it coz it applies to lots of people who write poetry, but they don't quite know why, you know when though, i like it

This comment is for your other poem 'Got There First' only i can't comment on it, i dunno why, i don't quite understand it, but i liked how it flowed n the rhyming scheme!

I don't think this one flows well, possibly because of the sporatic rhyming...
Maybe try again? Or just re-write a few of the parts...
Kelsea

Excellent poem!i ssoooo loved this 1!!....n i can relate too..like every other reader who hv read this!...superb write!Another Good 1 frm u!...kp it up!..
xxPoojaxx

Thoughtful. Cute.

The Angel of Secrets

Wow. iv never thought of wriing something like this before. hmmm unique it is! great wirk..nice rhymes n flow. 5/5 xx

I like this one and everything but a few of the stanzas didnt flow very good in my head. but other than that it was a great poem and it was worded right. 5/5

Brillantly penned poem, everything about it was great, it really kept me interested, great work

Beautiful and full of emotion XD. Inspires me to write a poem now lol.

I take it you like to write lol, The flow is good the topic is well descibed and held tight to the exsamples you give. All and all its a good poem keep up the good work Plot121

Wow.. i've never read a poem like this before.. very original.. you did a wonderful job.. i love the repeated stanza it really makes the poem a lot stronger..

Wow.... this is such a great poem. really i have no words to explain it. good job!!

Great poem! It really spoke to me because whenever I feel a strong emotion I write to let them out. Self expression is better in the form of words then in the form of red lines. *5/5*

Alyson

Hah good job
very great expressions
i loved it
another good poem by you
nice job

This was a good poem I enjoyed it alot I liked the description the stanza and the message was done quite well. Plot121

I know how you said this wasnt a good poem but I have to disagree with you on that. I really liked this one, it shows people that writing poetry doesnt have to be just about what people think love and sadness being a poet means that you can write about anything that makes you feel. Well done. This is the perfect answer for when people ask you "Why do you write?" So next time someone askes me I might have to give them this link. Wonderful work I really loved it. You shot this poem out of the water 5/5