At Least I Know I'm A Sinner {Kryielle Sonnet}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 6, 2007


Stash the money and the drugs,
I'm a pimp and I'm the winner,
Tell me I'm wrong, I'll shrug,
At least I know I'm a sinner.

Quick, figure out a place to hide,
The cops are not out to dinner,
Cover the blood of your bride;
At least I know I'm a sinner.

Dance Revolution; hit the floor,
The cops are not out to dinner.
In this place all filled with w|h|o|r|e|s;
At least I know I'm a sinner.
Stash the money and the drugs,
At least I know I'm a sinner.

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AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet
consists of only eight syllables.

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  • 17 years ago

    by thing3

    This poem has been in my favourites for a long time and i showed my band members and they like it too. we have a competition up soon but we're struggling with lyrics. we were wondering if we could take some lines from this poem.
    and if we get asked questions about the song, we'll give u credit! lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Lol I found this one preaty funny. The line that you chose to repeate was perfect. You seem to have a way with repetation. The only thing that I think would have made this poem better would be if you made it a little bit less dark. But other than that nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I liked the vivid imagery and the flow of everything.

    Nice job! 5/5

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    It was different, but it was good.
    It flowed well and rhyming didn't seem forced.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I like the reption thoughout the poem, it made the flow perfect. The imagery is vivd, and the word choice excellent again you get a 5. Very well written.

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