Comments : Tonight tonight!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I know what it means to ME, but with poetry it's sometimes difficult to tell if that's also what the writer intended. I guess it's the beauty of interpretation too.
    What I didn't understand and thought the wording sounded awkward was "of treasures of means" it was probably the repetition of "of."
    Ok to me the poem is about thinking you can't do things, or being scared and confused to try. The use of dreams and tonight makes me think it might be related to following dreams.
    The word "tear" is something I'd consider to be cliche.
    It was ok actually. Thanks for sharing.

  • I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

    GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great. Another 5/5.