I loved this
=]
I don't know if you know,
but Nature poems are my absolute favorite,
And this is the best one I've read on this site
In eons lol. Maybe not an eon,
That may be an exaggeration,
But you know what I mean, haha.
But, in this line...
"Though our gardens are serperate,"
Serperate should be seperate.
But then, it is perfect, =]
Great job Darling,
5.5

Nice. Vivid imagery, excellent format, flawless word chioce. It keept my intrest al the way though it. wonderfully written. 5/5

Wow I really loved this poem. Every time I read one of your poems I say its my favorite but as I move on to the other one I find a new favorite. You are an amazing writer, and you ability to create a masterpeice with so much structure just blows me away. The last two lines in this poem are my favorite by far, it reminded me of a lost love poem. Nice job.