Wow this is so cute great jobb my fave part is this
you may not be the brightest star in your sky
but you are the brightest and prettiest in mine
sooooo cuteee

well i hope lisa sees this anyways great job
keep up the good work
Erin

This is an ok poem, but I do think you should make a note that this was musically inspired because you used lines such as
"I hope you never lose your sense of wonder"
and
"I hope you never leave empty handed"

I could be wrong about who sings this, but isn't that part of a Martina McBride song??.....just thought I'd give you heads up because if they find you plagerized even a line they will delete your poem...maybe you can reword it?!

My bad its Lee Ann Womack...it just popped in my head....its called "I hope you dance"

"you may not be the brightest star in your sky
but you are the brightest and prettiest in mine"

Great work...lovely...beautiful work..excellent poem filled with passion...ver very cute!..kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

It's letters/poems like these I wish I could get often. Everything goes deeper then words and means the world to the person reading it. Good stuff :)

Ah, that's so sweet. i hope she loves you too :)

This iz so sweet & real i really luv it 4real

That was sooo beautiful!! 70/70 in your words lol. btw thanks for all of those comments.

I love your poems you should check my featured poems

Awww how sweet is that. your poems are really good. i think i'll add you to my favs. =}
5/5

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