by N J Thornton May 6, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Ten years old, |
Once again another one of those "snapping" poems it reminds me of. Another four but I enjoyed this one more than the last. |
by Marc Ortiz
Just like 'Contemplating Suicide' said "An intresting poem." I love the story behind the poem! well done! its short but I really enjoyed it! keep writing :) |
An intresting poem. I think your talking about a little boy with a talent of writing and then you go on to expand it, showing how much talent this young boy has, and how this talent can become something great in the future. I loved the way you used punctuation and enjambment. Loved the vocabulary you used, and your description creates this lcear image. On the last stanza you wrote "[future]" suggesting this word is important. It makes the reader think about this boys future. Intresting read... Keep them up! xx |