(last line) The Sun.

That's the only thing I suggest that you change.

Other than that, this poem was SORT of powerful. It wasn't as strong of an ending that I expected it to be, kind of a disappointing end, but it's wonderful. Also, the title should not be: The Sun[Rictameter] it should be The Sun [Rictameter]

Good job, and wonderful... What Happened to 1, though. It starts at 2.....

5/5
~Stephen White

I didn't like the fact
That you capitalized each word.
It just doesn't look right to me.
But other than that.
Wonderful.
You make the world realize
How beautiful the sun is.
It kind of weird, though.
I saw this poem as the sun is the "she"
And she is powerful.
But I also interpreted it as
You are the sun.
Lol.
I don't know if you were trying to do that.

Love it, better than the last one i read. Wonderful descriptions, it fit the style perfectly