Well written i wish i had your vocabulaly
when i was writting < i am your disease>
I THINK you could write it better. I like how
you put things. take a shot at writting about cocaine and addiction 5/5

cy

That is awesome. i even read this one to my husband, and he thought it was awesome too, and he is not into poems and stuff. the flow was exceptional, and the word choice is brillant. please keep up the good work, if you keep writting I will keep reading.5/5

I will write about crack cocaine and addiction. i have a lot of experience of it as my girlfriend is a heroin/crack addict. i am trying my best to help her but it is hard. ill post something tomorrow.

I was addicted to herion a year ago and your poem explains it exceptionally. I'm happy people are becoming aware of drugs and what they really do to people.5/5

As surprisingly hard as it is to write a rhyming piece without using common and boring words, you pulled it off nicely. Great work.
Aven

You were able to write this just by watching
wow you are truly on top of my fav, list
i off to work now but i can't wait to read
all your poems. my wife had alot of really good poems too. they were about me and the sh** i put her through my cocaine addiction. i got piss one day and said some
stupid s**t about them so off they went. I'LL
try to get her to put them back on this site
you'll relate. she always been outside looking
in when it came to my addiction. HEY thats
a good title for your poem you said you wanted to write.< outside looking in> i LIKE
THAT its all yours cygindle

I have to honestly say this is the best poem I have read in a long time,the rhyming was perfect the read interesting and beneficial ,very talented!

Read my sobriety sucks . if you want to know what it feels like staying sober read this poem, I UNDERSTAND life is a gift but does it always got to be a pair of socks? cy

Wow, this poem is fcking amazing man. i have had this thing affect someone in my life and this is so much of how people should look at it.

this poem is one of the best i have read in a really really long time.

you have great talents
5/5

Not much can be said apart form its totally brilliant. I love the way heroin has been made out to be like a person that actually kills, a murderer.......because thats what it is...

Amazing
and VERY ture with that ill take another 24