Great job, I can relate to this poem. I understand exactly what you're saying. 5/5

~Lizzie~

Awww, very sweet and beautiful!
The poem was flawless I couldn't
find not one mistake. The flow was
beautiful and the poem was penned
very well. God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)

The rhyming seems kind of forced.
Even if it doesn't rhyme
And it has a good message in it
It would turn out into a wonderful poem.
But it seems the flow is kind of rocky in this poem...
I'm sorry to say.
I will give you a 4/5.
If you want me to vote
PM me.
If you do not.
Then don't :]

I loved this poem it was very good and true, but i have to agree the rhyming was a little rocky. But every thing else was perfect!! really good