It's a sweet and deep poem. The style is interesting, and the word usage is beautiful. |
by Esther
Like, like, like |
by Vanessa
That was really really good. I loved the word choice withc was brillant, and vividly descrpitive, the beauty was deep and clear, and the flow was effin perfect. you did an excellent job, here. I think this would call for applause. really I do 5/5 although you deserve something more. |
Wow what a very unique look at nature. I liked how you took the first verse and showed the flowes dying in the night and how it was and then turned it right around and showed them comming back to life when the sunlight touched the sky. The message I got out of this was no matter how dark something is it will always get better in time. Not sure if thats what you wanted to send out but that's what I got. I loved how in the night you made it seem hopeless and sad but as soon as you started talking about the sun I felt refreshed and felt as though everything was fine. Nice job. |
I cant believe how well u did with this form... i tried it nd its horrible lol |