Maybe this poem should be in love, romance part instead of funny because i don't get where it was funny but okay. anyways i did enjoy this poem though.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wow great poem, short n simple love it
my fave part is this

i hope no one else will matter
or my heart will shadder

love it great job keep up the good work
erin

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey missy, thanks for ur comment. and i know this is silly, but i understand what ur going through because ive been there. and the best bit of advice i can give u is: dont let the empty hope that he'll come back tear u down and waste u away. seriously, it hurts for a while and therell always be a lingering feeling of love for him, but if u let it go now, the healing process can start a lot sooner and therell be way less pain... trust me hun... and yes, u can love at 17. dont be silly. dani x

Awesome, the poem was cute.loved it. Well you make me smile.^^ hehe

-sora-

This is so cute.

I really like this poem