I cant believe someone would not like this poem. wat not to like bout this poem. it all flowed well and the wording was great. sad yet so insighting.

5/5 David

Ok Gabriella first the story was good but you just have some structure issues in some places the flow was off but easily fixed you know I think this poem otherwise was really good

I thought it was pretty good, the flow was great and it was wel worded, keep up the good work, 5/5

Woah.....great flow.....so in depth it just captures you and takes you in.great job

This is good, i think your flow was a little of after the third stanza but still you captured an idea and expressed it. Words are so easy for you lol, i envy you.

xxx alex xxx

Well, to be honest this isn't a bad poem but I know that you can write a lot better. It is maybe too simple, you can use some metaphor to describe the emotions stronger.

This poem was pretty good. I thought it could of been just a touch better proberly because it was too simple for me therefor not holding enough emotions. The tpic you used was great though but the flow was off for me in most places. Overall not bad. ~Mel

A wonderful poem. It's perfect, not bad. It was dark, deep and very well written. Great Job 5/5