Whispering Wind (haiku)

by Hatori   May 7, 2007


Whispers of the wind,
A beautiful, quiet voice,
Calling out to me.

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This poem is a haiku. A haiku is:

a major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    I could just feel the peacefulness in this Haiku. It gave me a sense of openness, and what you have stated seems quite correct to me. THe wind calls out to you with a voice that you may not resist. Not only did you state to truth, but you also made the truth happen with a different type of writing. You did great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems, when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

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