This poem was one of your more better poetic poems. The flow and meaning worked well with this poetry. YOu had a gift with this one, and I cam glad that you took it in your hands and made something with it. I esspecially liked the last verse in which you talked about the whisper and it's meaning.

"The quietest truth, the truth of a whisper", it rings softly into my awaiting ears. How sweet the sound... Great job!

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

That is simple yet sweetly written well done.

This is interesting in a good way. i think the flw could have been better though. overall 5/5

I really like this one, it has such a nice rhyming scheme and flows really nice. good work x

I don't find its overall consistency forced nor cragged at all. In fact, it has a nice flow, despite of the seemingly forced, longer lines.

"It floats on the leaves,
Of a dozen white roses,"

I really, really like that couplet. The fact that you portrayed a whisper floating through the leaves of flowers is rather innovative and provocative. Further, in my own perspective, the color white symbolizes unblemished purity and chastity. Correlating it with the subject at hand enchants me even more! Ha.

In any case, there's no doubt that I enjoyed this thoughtful poem. Thank you for sharing, dear!

-Debbie Marian (^^,)