I cried when I read this poem, partly cause when I read it, I was listening to Lord of the Rings music (If you have seen that movie) and the poem went along with it. the flow was perfect and I don't think it could have changed. You did a wonderful job with this and I think I shall add it to my favorites! I like how you repeated (Almost) the first line at the end. I cried also in pain for the main character in this piece of art. So much pain and agony, I cannot bear to think of it. But your poem openned me up and I am thankful for it. Great job!

Wow the description situation, sadness of love, depth, choic of words all amazing and made me depressed, i imagined it all, 5/5 hope you read one of mine.

Wow, this is soooooo good...
i liked a lot your use of adjectives...it made the poem so much better...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Each glistening drop of this pouring rain,
Reminds me of that cold, dark day,
When so many tears were shed from my eyes,
And my poor weak body seemed to have died.

this is such a powerful and very emotional first phrase. i love it. throughout this poems i couls imagin everything. great work5/5.

This was si heartbreaking to read...and yet so beautifully written.
The imagery you used in this created vivid pictures, flow was good throughout the entire poem and the word choice was a joy to read.

.. soo deep .. and yet sooo powerful.. I loved every word, every line, and yet ur poem.. and your feelings that you have put into this poem.. very amzing job.. I loved...it .. your a amzing writer and I hope you never forget that.. because it pure talent.. pure talent which is your gift.. and I hope you never forget that.. good job.