I really liked it... Really nicely put together...

I really liked it its really cute.. did u write it about a girl friend?

I didnt quite get the first line the '...Their on their knees...' I dont know if I'm slow right now or something but i just dont get it. Other than that this was a pretty good poem. Most people DO think that love makes 'em happy ALL THE TIME and all that but they dont realize that sometimes love aint all that. Anyways well done, keep it up! 5/5

I loved it
it weas great 5/5 :]

I love it! great job 5/5

I liked it, good job!

To me, love is a painful and irrelevant emotion.
though I've heard that to go through that pain would make one stronger...
bummer
!!
V

"Its a gift that leaves one torn
Its a gift that makes one learn
Its a gift that burns"
^ Great job!
Fabulous. Such a creative & unique piece. The emotions were strong & the flow was flawless. You've got alot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Oh my.
This is undescribable...
I thought it was beautiful... and so true.. i loved it.

Thats very good :]
and very true
was it about an ex? or a girlfriend?

....I don't know what to describe how I feel about this....something like...I AGREE!!!! I don't know...loves a b**** ya know? Haha, 5 out of 5

Great poem, i love ur writing...plz vote and comment on my poem "woken nightmare"

Their on their knees
`They`re on their knees

Anyways, that was creative . The flow was okay . I don`t really have much to say . I liked it, but I like you`r other writings better .
Unique piece `tho .
..__MiNDYY

Yea i like this 1...it has a nice flo 2 it....

I love it! To the point and soo tru.

=]Dana

I love it! To the point and soo tru.

=]Dana