Comments : Don't You See?

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I know how you feel, well i can relate, transition at the beginging a little messy but love your poem maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    I like this poem good job 5/5 cynthia m. X]

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Nicely done...
    5/5

    God bless u

  • Each night I sit in my room and cry
    Knowing you'll never be in my life
    I have no other way of dealing
    Besides turning to my knife

    ^my fav part-I love it!5/5

    <3Amber

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Great! Emotions where all over this poem. Very heartleft. Flawless. Also very deep. Got me wanting to read more.
    5/5 Amazing job!