Now I have to drink a glass of water and go to bed cz now I am so confused.
until I solve this mistery have a good night.

I know, I will read my email the first thing when i get up.lol
I am hoping for one email though

Keep waiting crazy girl,hahahaha
yoo, come online tommorow or give me a call in the evening...

Hmm, long distances tear relationships apart.
i can feel this. i was practicly engaged before college, then when we split ways, so did our relationship. the responding with tears is a good line. and the last stanza is so true.

Wow, this was an excellent write, much emotion within. The flow as well as strucute was great as always.

This line, "Who couldn't be a feet away from me." should be "Who couldn't be a foot away from me." it is singular, not plural, therefore it is "foot" not, "feet"

Great work once again. Loved the read.

Peace, Joe

I like your poem very much, but a question is left...
"Why should I bother you?" the last verse, so why did you even bother starting the poem?

Dear i started the poem cause poetry is an art not a personal message for someone...
If no one care , i know SOME of my readers does so that is why i bothered to start the poem

Hey!....very beautiful poem!...very touching n well penned!....sad poem...but so PERFECT!....Great wrork!
xxPoojaxx

It had a disappointing ending, but it was not bad at all. I think you could have given more insight on why she left, because at first I thought she was at war and it messed up the whole depiction of the poem for me.

Well written, flawless, great job.

~Stephen White

Hey,
nice poem, in the beginning of the poem i was a bit confused but after the first two stanzas i understood it =)
Long distance relationships don't work most of the time 5/5
kisses stephanie

Hmmm... not too far away hehehe unless its million miles away! well its not so easy to have this situation very long distance relationship. to be honest i have currently having a long distance relationship and there are times i want to give up but in my heart its too hard coz i love that someone very much.. i only say all this things coz its kinda related w/ my personal life.. so i think it really touch me so perfect wirtten dear!5/5

lig

Well...usually poems that dont rhyme lose some of their flow....cant say the same abt this one...
great flow to it...
i liked that u had some verses longer than the other...which added to the flow of the poem...
pretty depressing poem...hope it all went well
5/5 from me =D

Wow. This is beautifully done. It is almost like a story, but still poetic. I love the first stanza, it has a lot of emotion-the entire poem does.
Wonderful job,
Kelsea

Ok, you just put me close to tears with that poem! it was beautiful, although it's always beautiful. so sad though :( i hope you're ok, love will go right for you sometime, i promise :D. 5/5 for you as always friend.

This was amazing. there was tons of emotion in this poem, i loved it!

WOW I love the opening stanza and the ending.. I wish I could express my feelings just like you did.. anyway this poem is very beautiful I really enjoyed it! good job!

Lovely, the poem seemed a little scattered, but that didn't detract from it at all. I really like the meaning, because I feel like I've been in a similar place before. Great work!

~jazzi~

Aw.. im sorry i hope this isnt true.. its soo sad.. but still i LOVE it.. how you talk of such simple things.. like sending an email and running into an old friend.. its so natural and that makes the poem so much better.. you didnt try to add extra drama for effect.. you simply wrote you emotions and they were strong enough in themselves :D

Your poems always make me say, "Awww!" out loud. Haha. I like how well the emotion in this piece is conveyed. It comes straight from the heart, and a strong impression of the persona is put across. Very nice.

This a great poem..you are one of my favorite authors...and i love reading your poems..keep it up=]

This was amazingly written.. The emotion was so strong as always in your poems and i cant say that enough. I truely found this to be superb and i really dont know what else to say to this as it just blew me away. Well done with this i truely enjoyed reading this and your others. Well done~mel