Don't Make Me Leave

by Brittany C   May 7, 2007


I hear the anger in your voice
and see it in your scorching eyes.

You have held in your anger once again
and now you are taking it out on me.

I am your friend and have been for years.
But there is only so much I can go through.

So please stop yelling at me my friend.
Just tell me what is wrong for I do not know.

You never tell me anything anymore,
as if I would just walk away from you.

Have I ever let you down before?
No, so why would I now when you need a friend?

I want to be here for you when I can.
But I wont put up with you yelling at me much longer.

So please just talk to me, your secret is mine.
I don't want to leave you behind.

But I will if you don't stop yelling at me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It sort of reminds me of my poem Hide and Seek. I like it. I know what you're talking about too. That only happened twice to me and we stayed friends luckily. :) Anyways. I liked the poem. It's not really my type but I have nothing bad to say about it. I'll give it a four because I felt there could have been something added to make it more unique, ya know to grab my attention. Good job though. ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Wow I can relate to this. It is a wonderful poem and I can tell thought went into it. definitely a job well done. I can pick up the strained feeling towards the end of the poem almost making it sad. still very well written 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Oh, well i liked that alot, it was great, good job, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The flow was a little bit off, but it was still really powerful. Nice job, keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Aww it must suck having your friend stop telling you things...I liked this poem. You got the message across with no trouble and the flow was pretty good. Well done!! Xx Chrissie

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