I agree with the flow was slightly off, but the message was very powerful, something I can relate to.. A minor typo at the end, you may want to fix(Not critisizing you, just letting you know) the word "Secret" was spelled "secrete" anyhow, a great poem once again, and a 5/5 =)
~Ally~

Aww it must suck having your friend stop telling you things...I liked this poem. You got the message across with no trouble and the flow was pretty good. Well done!! Xx Chrissie

The flow was a little bit off, but it was still really powerful. Nice job, keep up the good work.

Oh, well i liked that alot, it was great, good job, 5/5

Wow I can relate to this. It is a wonderful poem and I can tell thought went into it. definitely a job well done. I can pick up the strained feeling towards the end of the poem almost making it sad. still very well written 5/5

It sort of reminds me of my poem Hide and Seek. I like it. I know what you're talking about too. That only happened twice to me and we stayed friends luckily. :) Anyways. I liked the poem. It's not really my type but I have nothing bad to say about it. I'll give it a four because I felt there could have been something added to make it more unique, ya know to grab my attention. Good job though. ^_^