Hey i understand where your coming from... i know exactly how you feel it drives you insane but hold on.. follow your heart... trust me though from experience your ex is probably only paying you attention to feel better knowing he can still have you, im not saying there arent feelings there but not what used to be there.. just be careful :)
its an alright poem, i think the flow could of been a lil smoother but very relatable topic and i still enjoyed it alot thanks for sharing :)

Oh sorry if that sounds rude i didnt mean just alright, it was good but i read a couple of your others and you've produced stronger work. I still really enjoyed it though i hope that isnt taken the wrong way. sorry if it was :s xoxo

Great poem...loved ur wrk...but i guess this is surely not ur best 1...u r sooo talentd..u have'nt used all ur efforts for this 1....but all the same..it's different n nice...since u tried to do sumthing differnt yet so good-i'l give u a 5/5...
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Yer i think it worked well i noticed there was something about the stanzas as i strolled down, nice ideas aswel, ive had that problem,wel sorta lol xxx alex xxx

It was a nice, quick read, but I found a few punctuation errors throughout the poem. I like the different style you used, it made the poem more interesting to read. Nice work.

I know how you feel. I have been there, before, follow your heart, and everthing will be alright. Great job, and thanks for sharing.

I really liked it, if I didn't know you or the two guys I think this would have explained everything.

Oh yah,,,,its quite unique style and absolutely the flow was pretty good.

Aww if only we can love two at the same time.. actually I know this feeling.. it really happened to me anyway just an advice.. Pick your crush.. :) now you know that your ex is not loyal :) Great poem by the way! i like it!

Been here done that lol
It's so confusing isn't it
I hate that
But this poem was really good nice job!

I thought it was very good, like all your other poems theres alot of emotion, but it makes sense and i understand how you feel =}

Hm. I like the poem idea and the emotions that you chose to display but I still think that it reads more like a journal entry. Try to get rid of the words I and You, and use more metaphores.

I like this poem a lot... I have had a crush on more than one person...it is really hard to deal with...ha ha... I gave you a 5/5

The flow of this definitely could use some work. I don't like using differing number of syllables in each stanza, it just doesn't sound right. I think with some work this poem could be really cute...not a whole lot of work, just a little restructuring of your words. :)

I enjoyed this...the confusion is clear through the words.
I thought the flow was good throughout and the ending was beautifully wrapped up.

Nicee poem.. I like what you did with the whole syllables thing too.. it worked out well and a lot of people can probably relate to this in one way or another.. I know I can.. great job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment.

This is one of your better ones I have to say. I really like this one. Great job. Flow is overall much better and word choice is good. 5/5!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I like that you tried something different, it's evident that you tried hard with this piece, and I like that. I don't know why, but for me it doesn't seem to read like a poem. I think the flow could maybe have been a little better? But overall, it was well written.

Nice try. :]

Wonderful read dear! I've felt like the girl in the poem and its no fun. Keep writing. *5/5*

Alyson

Life is not perfect. no one's is... no matter how much we fabricate things. one day you will find a guy that loves you for you no matter what kind of girl you are... something a friend told me.. you need to love yourself before you can love someone else. I am not saying that you dont.. just wanted to share that with you. hope things work out. great work.
Bree