by RainbowSlider May 7, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
So glad you chose to share such intimate details of your life. |
by Isabella
Why is the rating only 3.5? |
by Soft Parade
I think you managed the poem well in its structure and got the feelings of the person through well. |
by Seth
Hm.. Well it was nice. It flowed ok.. It could be better. Try to have the same amount of syllables. Or some sort of rhyme scheme. |