I thought that it was very nice. Though I do think that it would be better if it was a little longer. Other then that it was great and had a nice flow. 5/5

I like how it was easy to read and not to comlicated. It may have came from scratch, but it was very well written. Keep up the good work Stephen.

I love ur poem...its so deep...and emotional......so beautiful.really!!!

Cute poem - makes me think of two nights ago, when I first slept next to my boyfriend.
(nothing more ^^)
He also has blue eyes so it's funny...

I really like this piece of writing. well done.

I really like this poem great job! keep it up!