by Bill Turner May 7, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Flowers dancing in the wind, blowing to and fro |
by Deana
This gives the reader a feeling of a lighthearted ,pleasant spring day. great imagery. |
by hani
Very nice and beautiful |
by Wallace
Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
by Cindy
Bill |
Very good poem. I liked it, it had very good imagery and you explained everything very good, but the last line might sound and flow a bit better if you make it.. |