Very good poem. I liked it, it had very good imagery and you explained everything very good, but the last line might sound and flow a bit better if you make it.. |
by Cindy
Bill |
by Wallace
Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
by hani
Very nice and beautiful |
by Deana
This gives the reader a feeling of a lighthearted ,pleasant spring day. great imagery. |