Comments : Letter to you

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is really sad but its filled with such strong emotion.. it was an enjoyable read but hard to read because the flow just wasnt there.. you should try adding some sort of structure to this poem.. it looks more like a paragraph

    however, it can easily be done :D

  • 17 years ago

    by paul alexander

    That is good keep writing