Really sweet poem you have here l really liked the wayi could imagine i was there, lovely flow :D

please read and comment on The bodys rain :D thank you xxx alex xxx take care

This was very sweet of you [= veryy nice
Carissa EE>

That is such a beautiful piece, Laura. I can feel the emotions through your words... I especially loved these two lines:

Betrayed by our facial expressions
You will be missed more than you know

You're such an amazing and inspirational writer!

The feelings and emotions were filled in this masterpiece and it was so chillling..You reflected the truths well and used such powerful words
My fave lines should be;

No "Goodbye" for this shall not be the end
Parting with the words "Until next time"

Keep it up,
From another Laura

Very nice! I love the NOT saying good bye! Good bye seems so HARSH! A very sweet gesture and done so wonderfully! Nice write!