Really short...but i guess thats the point
well..i gave u a 4/5...i think its a great poem..straight and to the point
only the "I no" part seemed forced

Short..but...well presented...the poem is penned well..though correcting "I no" to "I know"..will give the poem a better perfection..other wise..Good work!..
xxPoojaxx

Another sweet acrotic poem.. But once again, another short poem.. :)
why you didn't make it a alil bit longer, I'm sure it'll be better.. :)

Wow.. great work... i love it! *not wat i'm looking for* but it was a great find and read! awesome job!