by Poetic Grunt May 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Be strong and wipe away your tears/ because/ |
Very good, but you should take out the slash marks. Why don't you just use comma's, the slash marks draw away from the poem. Anyways 5/5 keep up the good work Shadowe. |
Very sweet baby i love you, keep it up, your amazing |
by Tricky Daze
Whoa..so sweet and i'm sure nessa will be proud of those words |