When

by Esther   May 7, 2007


When you love some-one
How do you tell them?
Yes, it is hard

It can't be hard, but
Should you even say it?

It might be best
To keep quiet

Though your going out
He might not,
Is this the right thing?
Sometimes, I wonder, Do I actually love him?

Hope
And Pray
Really,
Deep down I do!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Voice and Tender Heart

    This is actually true. I know when I first told my hubby I loved him, it was the hardest thing to do because I was scared he wouldn't love me back. This was an excellent illustration of that moment. Thank you for sharing.

  • 17 years ago

    by unknown

    Nice, but it's too short.. I'm sure you can make it a lil bit longer,especially the HARD part.. ^^
    It's a sweet acrostic poem..

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Some-one =someone
    The flow seemed a little off to me in some places but in others if flowed nicely. Although the emotion didn't seem to be held within this the meaning was good and it kept me interested from start to finish. A good effort. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Graet poem...yeah the flow was a tad off though but i guess the poem is great as it is.Good job!..perfectly portrayed message...5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Now this one doesnt seem forced at all!
    5/5 from me...
    i love these acrostic(sp?)poems...and apparently u do too :D

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