Now this one doesnt seem forced at all!
5/5 from me...
i love these acrostic(sp?)poems...and apparently u do too :D

Graet poem...yeah the flow was a tad off though but i guess the poem is great as it is.Good job!..perfectly portrayed message...5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Some-one =someone
The flow seemed a little off to me in some places but in others if flowed nicely. Although the emotion didn't seem to be held within this the meaning was good and it kept me interested from start to finish. A good effort. ~mel

Nice, but it's too short.. I'm sure you can make it a lil bit longer,especially the HARD part.. ^^
It's a sweet acrostic poem..

This is actually true. I know when I first told my hubby I loved him, it was the hardest thing to do because I was scared he wouldn't love me back. This was an excellent illustration of that moment. Thank you for sharing.