Oh oh oh, this is just simply beautiful, it certainly stimulated my senses..... you truly painted a perfect picture with your words.

This is just beautiful. I adore the second stanza, but the entire piece is fabulous. Really pretty/breathtaking imagery. Wish I never had to leave this poem...

Dude, can I come too? That simply too me there...I felt it...when you can do that (especially with so few words) you got SOMETHING!!!!! GO HEAD WITH YOUR BAD SELF!!!!!!!!!!!! I like that a ton!!!! Awesome write my friend!