Short but sweet, i liked it.
5/5
-Black night-

Haha...that's deep. I like how it was short but to the point. The words were very good, and you used good word choice. That way no matter how little you write, the words can convert into thousands of words, and can paint pictures. If you're able to do that, you can do anything with your words :) And you can.

It was amazing. I loved in how such short lines and simple wording, you were able to convey something with so much depth and meaning..
I loved the concept
Excellent work as always
5/5
*Gem*

I love this poem. i read ur profile and u sound like me lol. the depressing stuff in our poems keeps us happy!!! oxoxoxox