Best friend

by Valiantpenguin   May 7, 2007


Your hurting inside
i can see it in your eyes
but theres nothing i can do
to stop how much you cry
you harm yourself
and it breaks my heart
i love you dear cant you see?
and your pain tears me up inside
i wish i could tell you
but i know that i cant
so I'll sit back and hurt
and be your best friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    I was meant to comment on this poem last week. Congratulations on winning the club contest. :) Anyways, this is a really emotional peace of writing. It shows how much you care about whoever your writing this about. It was quite short yet really sweet and emotional. I thought this belongs more in the sad section of the website though. Or maybe friedship. The flow of the poem was good though a little sketchy at times. It was an emotional peace. To improve it i suggest you use punctuation. Otehr then thata good read. Keep writing! xx

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