This poem is really amazing!!
i love it
good job

Wow this poem reminds me of myself, and how messed up our society is. Another great write darling!

This was a pretty good poem. I really liked how you protrayed on how a girl really wants to be thinner. 5/5

This is one of those poems that really makes you think about what you say to people. Another masterpiece! 5/5

Josie