The dreams we have...

by Valiantpenguin   May 7, 2007


With everyday that passes
I'm falling faster toward the ground
it seemed as if I've been looking
for something that couldn't be found
might this be the answer
to all the dreams we've had
could there be some course
to help rid me of this craze
but with all the minutes
you hold me in your arms
you build up my love
you raise up my hopes
you kill me with your truths
cant we make things right again?
cant we fix it all tonight?
cant i hold you in my arms once more
all through every night
cant i tell you just once more
how much i truly love you?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was good for a love poem. It keept my intrest, anyway, witch is somewhat unususal, for a love poem. the flow was good, but some of it seem a bit forced, but the emtion was strong and clear. Good job 4/5

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