by aDORKable x3 May 7, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Blonde hair and blue eyes, with a heart of plated gold- |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Hmm. the words behind it carried emotion and a sad story. nicely down. |
The imagery in this was excellent. It really helped to place a vivid image of this girl in my head. |
As you already know, I love this poem. You used great words and imagery and really drew me into it. Great job Darling. |
This reminds me of films like mean girls and american pie. Its not reallylthat bad in the uk but i still get this poem. I love the way you use your voice to raise issues about this and how people react to it. Well done keep up the good work hunni xxx alex xxx |
Don't we all get that way with a friend? Oh yes we do. I really liked how you portrayed this poem like you've done. 5/5 |