Lock It...

by Painted By Colors llInLovell   May 7, 2007


And In your mighty arms,
I begged you to lock my heart,
Take me forever, I'll be yours,
And No one else will be let in...

This love will be our world,
Just you and I, no one else,
Please, shut the doors,
And lock them.

Where we lay, so close,
We tangle ourselves together,
Just us, I just see you,
And the whole world melts around us...

Lock it.
Lock the doors, Lock my heart,
You are mine..
And I am yours.

♥

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  • 17 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This is pretty, i feel that the flow was well planned out and i like the way you put your feelings down in words...your use of words makes me think that you are a deep person with a lot of emotions...you have got to be talented in writting for someone to be able to see that when reading your poetry...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great poem....very cute work!!...short..Very cute...and to the point write!!....and the way u've filled in each line wth emotion is great...kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    That was a great poem. it was deep. Great job. There was a lot of emotion in it to.
    it flowed and rhymed good. anyway keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was really deeper than it seemed. I loiked it. the style was a little diffrent.The word choice was great, the flow was wonderful, and the emtion was strong. Great job on a well written poem. there is nothing I could think of that would improve this work. Perfect 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    I really liked that poem, short, sweet and to the point. Excellent message, I loved it. 5/5 from me!