by Painted By Colors llInLovell May 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
And In your mighty arms, |
This is pretty, i feel that the flow was well planned out and i like the way you put your feelings down in words...your use of words makes me think that you are a deep person with a lot of emotions...you have got to be talented in writting for someone to be able to see that when reading your poetry...5/5 |
Great poem....very cute work!!...short..Very cute...and to the point write!!....and the way u've filled in each line wth emotion is great...kp it up! |
That was a great poem. it was deep. Great job. There was a lot of emotion in it to. |
by Vanessa
That was really deeper than it seemed. I loiked it. the style was a little diffrent.The word choice was great, the flow was wonderful, and the emtion was strong. Great job on a well written poem. there is nothing I could think of that would improve this work. Perfect 5/5 |
by Taylor Lyn
I really liked that poem, short, sweet and to the point. Excellent message, I loved it. 5/5 from me! |