Ok, seriously, your so talented!
This is the 2nd poem I've read from you and its by far one of the best I've ever read, your going straight on my favs list.

What a first line,"An old man covered in the graffiti of age," Classic! graffiti, i love it!

That was a liitle diffrent than most of the poems i read on this site. I like it An old man covered in the graffiti of age, powerful statement. It drew me in. wonderfully written, emtions are strong,and word choice is good. 5/5

You've got talent. Your poem was awesome. I thought the imagery in the poem was superb. The first line about the graffiti was a very unique and creative description. Good job. 5/5

Different, but loved it. Flawless, flowed well and was so clear throughout the whole poem. Beautifully described when saying an old man covered in graffiti of age.. that was awesome and powerful well done.!!

I can surly say that this poem is one of the best poems ever. this was written so greatly and that is why you are the greatest poet here.
i really admire your talent.
a 5/5 as you really deserve it.

I'm speachless. That was brilliant!!!

Josie