Wow very interesting loved the last lines. 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Great write...this 1 is well penned...u r good in writing short and equally powerful works...kp it up!
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Ohh.. ok i will think about that(* __*),,, love it! i can see u have a unique style for wring a poet.. very nice and impressive,, some readers i hope they can notice it,, coz short but it means alot,, keep it up5/5

I love the last lines, ot was very impressive, and you have a unique style so please keep it up,