I'll keep loving you

by frens   Apr 16, 2004


If you could see me,
just for a moment,
you would know that,
My love last forever.

If you could hear me,
for as long as it takes,
you would now that,
all the stories were about you.

if you could touch me,
for one whole night,
you would feel that,
my heartbeats just for you.

If you could sit,
right next to me,
you wold know,
i'll be your crying shoulder.

If you could see,
how much i love you,
you would have seen,
that i love you the best i could.

To sara, it might not be the sweetest, the greatest nor the best but this is the sincerest... i love you gurl...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Williams

    Yes I have aol my screen name is BananaBunches21 yeah sometimes my poems get too long because when i start i just keep going because i always have a lot to say ...lol ask my friends they'll tell ya...i could talk for hours and not get bored or repeat anything. I guess that is why everyone says that i am the life of the party :) I just like to make people happy and smile ;) so im me sometime if you wanna my email at school is a_williams@sau23.k12.nh.us and my other email is roxychic_028@hotmail.com

    Hope to hear from you soon
    XoXo
    ~*Ashley*~

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Williams

    I gave you a 5 :) cuz that came straight from the heart. If some guy wrote a poem like that to me, my heart would completely melt. You have a talent, don't let it slip away and I hope to read more of yours. Check out mine if you'd like. Good job again
    ~*AshleyAnne*~

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