You WILL NOT delete this mr! >.<
I liked this, you have a knack for writing love poems,
and making them different every time.
How you do it, I do not know,
but there is always another story behind them,
and I love reading your work when you post.
=]

5.5

If u delete it.. u die... lol it's really good.. sadly you seem to think it's some of your worst work and it's better than my best work lol

For eveyone to know, i wasnt planning on deleting the poem, it was an inside joke with jenna, no worries.

Bryan
For this being your first try at this poetry form. You did great. I love the imagery you have penned.

Feel the touch of her hand, locked in mine,
But the torture I've endured, all the pain,
Like love and hate that is forever entwined,
So much anger and hate, I cant explain.

Loved this stanza.
Great job keep them coming.
Take care your friend Cindy

Nice poem, I really liked it, the flow was good, and the style you used was excellently done, good job.

This is great and thank you for putting an explaination of what a sonnet is at the end or else i wouldnt have understood what made it different from anything else good job

keenan

Most excellent goes with myfeelings now

Great Job..GREAT job!
the flow was nice
the words were perfectly
rhymed and describe
5/5 yo
TPC

Wow this was truly beautiful... A nice piano melody with this and it would be enchanting. Great work on this Sonnet Bryan I hope you make more of thease wonderful pieces

=D

I loved the content of the poem so much! Once again fantastic flow, great wording...

Note: "May it will heal after being torn apart"
Shouldn't "May" be "Maybe"?

Josie

You're really good at writing sonnets! :) You have a great talent. Anyway flow was okay for me.

My favorite line.
Feel the touch of her hand while locked in mine

5/5 as always :)

Nice one. It was different. I gave it a 5/5.

Excellent poem thanks for your comment on "The Void"

Comment #3:
This poem was very interesting. Unlike many love poems here on the site. And I really liked it...I like how it shows a new take on love, how its joy is short-lived for the bitterness you feel as well. Great job! 5/5 for sure.
~Midnight Sun