Tracy
Good job on this write. Diffrent but great.

But I don't care, what the people try to do
I love my country and I'll always be true

Love these lines. Very moving.
Take Care Cindy

Um...to be honest i liked it. I think you could've done a little bit better with your word choice. But over all keep up the good work!

Thats very good tracy. I enjoyed it quite a bit. 5/5

It was diffrent than alot of poems I read. But I liked the message behind it. Your word choice was good, not as compelling as some you have wrote, but good. The flow was great, and i could feel a sense of pride. I liked that best of all. 5/5

Nice poem.

Oh my gosh Tracy. I had tears in my eyes because of this. This is so heartfelt and so true. yes we all have to fight for our country.

Alway be true....its veryy good. great job!

This poem is very emotive and powerful, my only criticism was this line:

But we have stop and go at a slower pace

i think you need to add: we have TO stop....

other than that a moving, vivid piece of work. it seemed to capture your mindset like a photo, well done

(ps, sorry it took me so long to reply)

I like the stubborness in this peice. lol. it's mixed with a good dose of pride and patriotism.
very nice
<3
L.C

Really like this one. something i can relate to, with very good word choice. its also true to the way a lot of people feel / think. love it, 5/5.

xx

Excellent poem! Sorry for the late reply, I haven't had time to go online in a while. But I think this is real good! I liked the part about raising your hand to say something. It's so true...