Comments : Finally Happy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Its going to be ok
    Im going to get through the day
    All the bad thought are gone
    Its time for me to move on
    It might be hard and long
    But Im willing to be strong"

    Excellent stanza! Very optimistic
    The hardest part is moving on
    Nice use of repetition!
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem love the stanza, and the poem was beautifully written , great job sweetie, 5/5
    your friend Tracy