Amazing

by Taylor   May 8, 2007


A girl met a boy today
She never thought she could feel this way
The girl thought the boy was amazing
The boy thought the girl was just blazing

The girl has a boyfriend
Whom she tries to defend
She will have to tell this boy
Which she won't enjoy

The boy walks away with tear-filled eyes
The girl just doesn't realize that she is that boy's demise
The boy just doesn't realize that her boyfriend is killing her inside
The boy didn't care to fight for her, he just cried and cried

Her boyfriend is controlling and abusive
She is tired of acting illusive
She just wants it all to be over
She knows it won't be easy, he will want moreover

She went to her boyfriend that night
He started beating her again with all his might
She told him they were through
When he started acting even more untrue

She ran and ran as hard as she could to get away
All she could do was try to pray
With tears flowing from her eyes
She was not ready for this suprise

Soon arms flung around her in a loving embrace
She looked up and saw him with a smile on his face
She tries to tell him, but no words would come out
She could tell her already knew because he was so devout

He looked at her with true love in his eyes and said "You are amazing."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well written..very beautiful poem..well done...5/5 u deserve it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well written..very beautiful poem..well done...5/5 u deserve it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Raelyn

    This is amazing. i get what you mean by this. with christ and all :) great job.