I feel your pain
your not the only one
whos gone through to a
low point like that...But I really
like it its very strong.

Awesome.

This is an excellent poem,, me, i dont care how long a poem is,, i just care about wat the words mean,, this is an excellent poem,, im sorry this happened to you, it happened to me as well, not as bad,, but still, u just have to try ur best to believe god did that for a reason, wat i dont know,, if god wants something done,, he will get it done,, there is no running away from wat god has set for us,, anyway,, 5/5
Janaynay

Excellent poem, I enjoyed it! It brought tears to my eyes.... I'm so sorry... This has a beautiful story and great emotion, great vocabulary and choice of words.... Keep up the wonderful work!
Always,
Sky

Ver nice, i thought it was a nicely penned poem. the description was magnificent and the flow was nice and smooth, 5/5, great job

This too was a very long poem but very sad. I hope that you didnt have to go through this. I agree witih xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex it was kind of cliche but the ending of it I liked it was something different that doesnt normally get seen. The aftermath isnt something that people normally like to talk about. And its true this kind of thing can happen to anyone and you have to be careful, I'm so sorry yet again for what happened to you. The only thing that would make this poem better would be more metaphores.

Your words are so deep, so pain filled.
It's devestating the effect rape can have on someone's life, even many year's later.
You portrayed everything precisely.
Amazing.
Truly Amazing,
5/5 Elaine.

Wow! that's so sad. i have goosebumps. really well written and shocking. makes me angry! well done at packing so much emotion into one poem! it was long, but i couldn't look away!