You Give Me Wings

by Brittany C   May 8, 2007


Gliding on the wind.
High above the ground
Watching as life goes on.
There's no worries honey,
all is well as far as I can see.

For we are together
you are the only one,
who gives me my wings.
My soul is flying because
you love me for me.

All is right in the world,
or at least the love part,
because we are together.
We have beaten the odds,
when others thought we couldn't.

You are my only love,
the only one who can,
give me beautiful wings.
I will always love you,
no matter how hard the times.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    WOW this is amazing! well done great imagery created here! flow was good! well done keep writing I like these lines

    For we are together
    you are the only one,
    who gives me my wings.

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The rhythm here is excellent, love the language, imagery, flow, evrything. great poem

    kim xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    This poem is filled with love and promise.
    It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
    Keep it up 4/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Good poem. Very cute ^_^ I really liked the words used. Especcially the 'you love me for me'...Well done!!

    Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Erm. think you should put on the last of the second stanza you love me for being me instead it just helps the flow. Other than that it was a exellent poem full of emotion :D

    xxx alex xxx

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