That was so so sad. Beautifully written, excellent show of emtions. the flow was perfect, and the message was clear. I don't know you but, I will never forget you or what you just wrote. Excellent work. 5/5

This is a sad poem and written nicely with perfect flow and rhyme. however,i do not agree with the message as we are all here for a reason, no one is better than no one. we have to have courage to go ahead in life and make something that people remember us for.
once a pearl fall down on a ocean, every drop of water were waiting for the pearl to get them, a drop said, i wouldnt even bother as in this big ocean why this pearl would even come close to me? however that pearl got to the same drop which became a piece of diomand.....

you are something, as not everyone has your poetry talent..... think of it that way, as you are and artist cause poetry is the best form of art in which you are perfect.

keep up the great job, and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

This is a sad poem but you are not nothing! I loved the flow and the rhyming in it. i hope you the best of luck :) 5/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

Excellent poem, with a lot of heart and full of meaning, the flow was great
You would think I'm nothing
If you had ever met me
You might put on a fake smile
But you would soon forget me~~~keep up the great work, you area very bright young lady and I respect that with a very big heart, your friend Tracy

Very sad. but beautifully written. you have a way with words and the flow, which seems to always be magnificent, 5/5

Great poem...sad though but beautifully penned work filled with beauty and meaning!
Kp up the good work dear!
xxPoojaxx

Wow I really liked this one. And I agree with everyone it was a magnificant write. You are a very good poet.. not nothign as you claim to be in this poem. A nothing is a waste of space and you were put here to share your experiences through your words and you are doing a fine job of that.

This is a great and very insightful poem, I'm sorry that you feel that way if it is about you, try to let optimism light the path of your future.

PrinceCharming,

Wow great poem. i really liked"I once was afraid of nothing
Until i knew i was wasting space
Then I thought of suicide
But was scared of the pain I'd face" your a goot poet and im putting u into my favs.

5/5

Very sad poem, but truly spectacular! keep up the great writing!

Very sad poem, but truly spectacular! keep up the great writing!