by Vanessa
You wrote it, be proud to post it. I think you did a good job, but like you said not your best. Eh we all have poems like that. The flow was good, the word choice was great, but ti was alittle dry on the emtions. Anyway still i give you 4/5. keep up the good work. |
by skynerraw
I'm glad you didn't delete it, its a great poem, you did a wonderful job, the flow was great, and a great word choice :D Great poem! |
by Mousie
Good poem i enjoyed it, thought it was truly well written. great job, keep up the good writing |
The Gods ware not nice to this woman. |
I think that this line "Yet only a few survived and thrived" disrupts the flow because the rhyme within the line |